"It takes a village to raise a child." The education of your children is the task of the community as a whole, not merely the province of teachers and local school administrators.
In 30 minutes, compose an essay on the quotation above. Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the views expressed in the quotation. In doing so, be sure to explain the reasoning behind your taking this position. Consider to what degree the statement may or may not be true; take this into account in your discussion. You may not write on any other topic.
A common adage is " A child is future's man". In anisciant times, when people used to live in clusters and after some progress in villiages and tribes, their sorrows and grievies were common. They even did not had boundry wall of their home. So, everyone was well aware with the conditions and responsibilities of other. Old people of the village or tribe were the heads and were responsible to take care the well beings of their people. So, it was not possible for youngones to deviate from the set rules of village heads. Young ones were being taught moral lessons and then were given physical trainings to get prepared for inevitable attacks of other tribes. It was a common practice that parents used to send their children to some reputable and wise persons to make their children learnt persons.
However, todays life is altogether different form past life. Privacy and independence are the key words of the modern life. Even, siblings donot get ready to stay together after marriage. They do not like to be interferred by parents also. Moreover, todays fast moving life has produced thoughts of jelousy in people. Any progress of neighbor or colleague, arise feel of unesness. Then in this scenario, giving ones child in others hand for education or moral upgradation may yield problem instead of good results. Therefore, I disagree with the statment that community should raise the child. Hence, to raise a child is the holy soley responsibility of parents only. Language, moral values and ethics, all truly reflect the parents who bring the child. After that, it becomes the responsibility of tearchers to train the kids and make them active member of the society. School teachers and school environment play important role in defining ones life. Whatever, young people learn in school, display
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 220, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...grievies were common. They even did not had boundry wall of their home. So, everyon...
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Line 2, column 94, Rule ID: KEY_WORDS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'keywords'?
Suggestion: keywords
... life. Privacy and independence are the key words of the modern life. Even, siblings dono...
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Line 2, column 234, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...o not like to be interferred by parents also. Moreover, todays fast moving life has ...
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Line 2, column 411, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...unesness. Then in this scenario, giving ones child in others hand for education or m...
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Line 2, column 942, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ronment play important role in defining ones life. Whatever, young people learn in s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 2235.4752809 68% => OK
No of words: 302.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00662251656 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55793791121 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619205298013 0.4932671777 126% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.464481649 60.3974514979 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.0 118.986275619 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.380952381 23.4991977007 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 5.21951772744 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.97078651685 40% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0980950057742 0.243740707755 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0276749508478 0.0831039109588 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352118493022 0.0758088955206 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0735741364563 0.150359130593 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267377754023 0.0667264976115 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 48.8420337079 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 12.1743820225 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.