Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student`s field of study.
While it might be helpful to take an eclectic range of courses, I do believe that undergraduate studies should provide in-depth and focus knowledge in a particular major.
First, when a student has decided on a major, it is crucial to equip him/her with fundamental information within the 4 years of study. The duration of the undergraduate programs may seem long but it is only sufficient to provide the foundation for the students before they jump into the real world industry, where jobs are increasingly demanding. Many surveys have shown that students feel not ready for their first jobs. It is attributed to the education which focuses on the broadness in stead of depth and the application end of the knowledge. It would be helpful if the first two years are meant for the foundation knowledge of the field and the last two years will allow students to dive into the sub categories of the topics like Artificial Intelligence, Machine Learning if they chose Computer Science as their majors.
Secondly, if there is a requirement to fulfill other elective courses outside of the main major, it not only takes up valuable time of the students, but also may affect the his/her overall performance. Studying subjects rather than your interested subjects may demand more mental efforts and thus take longer to finish assignments. Additionally, if students are not able to perform well on these electives, it may pose adverse effects on the average GPA. Unfortunately, this GPA then would not reflect the real performance of the students on their intended subjects.
Thirdly, not only do students have some disadvantages, universities also may face some difficulties to cope with this guideline due to their course limitation. Smaller size universities would have a hard time to accommodate sufficient elective options for their students. More budget dedications would be reallocated to expand their academic faculties. However, this expansion does not guarantee a better quality output since it provides student with a broader yet not deeper knowledge. The budget would be rather be invested to improve the laboratory equipment or study facilities or to get more acclaimed professors and experts in the field of study. The exposure with the pundits and latest inventions help students to integrate better when they enter the workforce.
In short, I am more inclined to the fact that students should focus on their major in the higher education. And it would need more evaluations in terms of pros and cons to decide whether students are compulsory to take course outside of their field of study in universities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'instead of'?
Suggestion: instead of
...ducation which focuses on the broadness in stead of depth and the application end of the kn...
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'his'?
Suggestion: the; his
...me of the students, but also may affect the his/her overall performance. Studying subje...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, thus, well, while, in short, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.6327345309 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.9520958084 124% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 11.1786427146 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 13.6137724551 51% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 28.8173652695 118% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 55.5748502994 106% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 16.3942115768 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2198.0 2260.96107784 97% => OK
No of words: 427.0 441.139720559 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14754098361 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.56307096286 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87108931579 2.78398813304 103% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 204.123752495 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548009367681 0.468620217663 117% => OK
syllable_count: 688.5 705.55239521 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.96107784431 181% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 19.7664670659 91% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.8473053892 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4062349315 57.8364921388 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.111111111 119.503703932 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7222222222 23.324526521 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 5.70786347227 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301131989742 0.218282227539 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882317208442 0.0743258471296 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621214967222 0.0701772020484 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173527174944 0.128457276422 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711177591978 0.0628817314937 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.3799401198 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.3550499002 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.197005988 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.5979740519 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.32208582834 110% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 98.500998004 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 12.3882235529 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.1389221557 101% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.9071856287 126% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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