You have been offered a job that will require you to move to a city that you have
never visited before. You have an acquaintance who lives there.
Write a letter to the acquaintance. In your letter
• explain your situation
• say why you feel unsure about living in the city
• ask some questions about life in the city
Hi John,
It has been more than a year since our last meetup when you visited me back in December. I hope that you and your family are all doing well. I am writing to ask you for some advice regarding life in Vancouver. As you may not know, I just receive an offer from an animation studio in Vancouver. How amazing is that! This studio has produced many internationally acclaimed series, which definitely a spectacular opportunity for me to practise my expertise.
On the flip side, I am a bit unsure about moving to Vancouver because I don't have any relatives and friends there except for you. Additionally, little did I know about its lifestyle. Thus, I'm so worried about integrating into the new culture. After our graduation, you know, I spent most of my time working in Singapore while you decided to continue your higher study in Canada.
It would be much appreciated if you could recommend some peaceful neighborhoods that are suitable for me to rent. By the way, I don't know much about Vancouver's transportation system? Is it similar to Singapore with a complex network of trains and buses? Or driving your own car is more of an optimal option to get around. Lastly, I understand that the weather in Vancouver is vastly different from a tropical island like Singapore. What should I prepare before my departure to Canada in terms of necessities as well as clothing.
I would love to catch up with you as soon as I arrive in Vancouver and look forward to hearing from you soon.
Best regards,
Diamond
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2021-07-20 | Navsangeet Kaur Han | 73 | view |
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, lastly, look, may, regarding, so, thus, well, while, except for, you know, as well as, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 26.3917525773 159% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1259.0 937.175257732 134% => OK
No of words: 267.0 206.0 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71535580524 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78036855433 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 127.690721649 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65543071161 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 290.88556701 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5045004838 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0588235294 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7058823529 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 4.34317383033 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308020645786 0.216113520407 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857004235982 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809905679267 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188006484146 0.12726935374 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660229287826 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.