Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's field of study
because acquiring knowledge of various academic disciplines is the best way to become truly educated.
In general, I agree with the assertion that every student has to go through the courses outside their major field of study to become truly educated.The above proposition in agreement with pursuing more knowledge in every possible area by not affecting the actual academics.
The main reason why I agree to this proposition is gaining the knowledge in every possible manner to be more
informative.While pursuing any degree in the universities it is important to do something which is outside the field of
study to be more efficient and active.Taking various courses and studying them develops the students academic
performance to be better.Sometimes, it happens that not all students are aware of these type of courses or extra academic
disciplinary activities.I believe that universities should introduce to them and encourage them to use it in most profitable
manner to individuals.
Secondly, sometimes it is necessary to do all these extra curricular academic courses.Nowadays in competitive
world most students prefer to be extraordinary in their study of field with having such certified academic disciplines
to their competitors.Extra academic courses would reflect the resume of a freshmen. While pursuing main degree in the
universities this type of academic activities would result in a better improvisation of particular ones.Though it takes
some efforts to make it happen and sometimes it is not necessary to do every possible ones but if universities make it
to do some compulsory extra courses that would be beneficial to each and every student.There are some universities who
are offering some tremendous courses to the students offline as well as online also, which helps the international
students to acquire knowledge in best possible ways.
Today there are so many courses are available offered by many universities from different countries also. There
are some well known platforms like Edx, coursera, udemy which offers a certified courses from a well known universities
which help the students to build their skills as well as their scholastic profile in a systematic manner.For an example
Stanford university offering so many different programs in humanities, computer science , management fields. Harvard
university is well known for it's law field or we can say it is one of the best schools to learn but not every student
can go their and pursue it. So now, it is also available on such education platforms that every student can take
course curriculum in affordable manner.
In the final analysis, to become a truly educated by intellectual study of various academic disciplines universities
should offer compulsory courses in student's academic foe their well being and more competitive to the world. When you are learning something you are gaining knowledge. So, never stop learning to become truly educated.
- Educational institutions should actively encourage their students to choose fields of study that will prepare them for lucrative careers. 62
- The following is a memorandum from the business manager of a television station."Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news. During this period, most of the comp 77
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. 66
- Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's field of studybecause acquiring knowledge of various academic disciplines is the best way to become truly educated. 50
- The primary goal of technological advancements should be to increase people's efficiency so that they have more leisure of time. 58
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommends taking'.
Suggestion: recommends taking
This argument recommends to take drivers education course at Centerville...
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Line 1, column 98, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e at Centerville High School specific to teenagers.The author bases this argument...
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Line 2, column 12, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...le High School specific to teenagers.The author bases this argument on the facts...
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Line 4, column 70, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... the driving lessons to their children. Also the drivers education course is expe...
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Line 4, column 79, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'drivers'' or 'driver's'?
Suggestion: drivers'; driver's
...ing lessons to their children. Also the drivers education course is expensive , due ...
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Line 4, column 106, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...en. Also the drivers education course is expensive , due to that some parents can...
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Line 5, column 11, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...drivers education course is expensive , due to that some parents cant afford it...
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Line 5, column 39, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... expensive , due to that some parents cant afford it. Firstly, the argument f...
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Line 8, column 61, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Or
...s? Who or What caused the car accident? or the accidents which is occured are caus...
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Line 8, column 108, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...accidents which is occured are caused by Canterville High School students? If it ...
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Line 9, column 95, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'drivers'' or 'driver's'?
Suggestion: drivers'; driver's
...them then what is the point to take the drivers education course at that particular s...
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Line 10, column 105, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... caused by the teenagers are enrolled to local high school education course? In o...
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Line 11, column 59, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... education course? In order to conclude in a positive way author must specify that school spon...
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Line 11, column 108, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tive way author must specify that school sponsered mandatory driving course would...
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Line 13, column 2, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...would have prevented these accidents. Secondly, the given argument is problama...
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Line 15, column 47, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rs education course would be effective. Though it does not provide enough information ...
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Line 15, column 108, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ovide enough information to support this assumption. After all this arguments fai...
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Line 16, column 14, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ormation to support this assumption. After all this arguments fails to proove its ...
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Line 16, column 24, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...o support this assumption. After all this arguments fails to proove its assumptio...
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Line 16, column 110, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...that the teenagers parentsin Centerville cannot afford private driving instructio...
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Line 18, column 2, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...me shortage to their day to day life. In conclusion, the author fails to subst...
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Line 19, column 102, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ndation for a school sponsered mandatory driving course. To strengthen the argume...
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Line 20, column 44, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...iving course. To strengthen the argument ,the author must provide enough prrofs th...
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Line 20, column 112, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ough prrofs that Centerville High School students caused the accidents in questio...
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Line 21, column 111, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...urse would have prebented them. There is no other information is given about two ...
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Line 23, column 58, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ability of the private driving courses.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, after all, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.6327345309 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.9520958084 54% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 11.1786427146 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 13.6137724551 88% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 28.8173652695 94% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 55.5748502994 68% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 16.3942115768 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 2260.96107784 78% => OK
No of words: 312.0 441.139720559 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.625 5.12650576532 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.56307096286 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81782617125 2.78398813304 101% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 204.123752495 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503205128205 0.468620217663 107% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 705.55239521 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 19.7664670659 91% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.8473053892 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 62.229191078 57.8364921388 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5 119.503703932 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 23.324526521 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.70786347227 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 20.0 5.15768463074 388% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 26.0 5.25449101796 495% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 6.88822355289 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311738843883 0.218282227539 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939543547997 0.0743258471296 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836428829824 0.0701772020484 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0969471453857 0.128457276422 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0880810912512 0.0628817314937 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.3799401198 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 48.3550499002 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.197005988 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.5979740519 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.32208582834 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 98.500998004 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 12.3882235529 69% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.1389221557 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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