Universities should require students to take courses only within those fields they are interested in studying.
High schools allow students to choose elective courses in order to give them freedom to broaden their experience of different fields of study. Universities should thus not restric students to take courses merely from those fields which they are interested in studying. Many students who just graduated from high school does not fully recognize their area of interest. Some students think that they would be excellent doctors, pharmacists, or engineers before matriculating to university. However, after attending few courses at the university, it is farely common for students to change their major either because they believe that the major they are currently studying does not fit their interest or because the major is too difficult for them.
In order to let students experience other fields to identify which major they fit best, students should have freedom in choosing the courses they take. Through these encountering with fields outside of their major, they can be more versatile as a student and find their future career. If they were restricted to study only the courses within the major they study, they will never find out whether other major fits them better or not. It is also common for students to choose courses in order to learn something new and enhance their skills. A lot of music, art, physical education, and business courses allow students to find new hobbies and skills or enhance their current abilities. Even though these courses may not be within the fields they are studying, the opportunity to learn through various courses will allow students to have fun and broaden their skills.
Moreover, through these opportunites, students can find new friends outside of their fields and widen each other's perspectives. Without the opportunity to take the courses from fields outside of their own major, it is difficult for students to make friends who pursue a different career. It is true that students will more likely graduate within 4 years if the universities require students to take courses only within their major. However, since the students are going to be working for next few decades anyways, it would be more benefitial to allow them to further their ability and character by taking different courses. They would be more happier if they spend 1 or 2 extra year in college to find a field that they truly enjoy. Although it is true that there are few benefits from universities requiring students to take courses only within the fields they are studying, the benefits coming from allowing students to freely choose courses are far greater.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 2251, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'happier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: happier
...taking different courses. They would be more happier if they spend 1 or 2 extra year in coll...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2150.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 423.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08274231678 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49069379898 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.451536643026 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 646.2 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3364120593 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.470588235 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8823529412 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64705882353 5.21951772744 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.474572944966 0.243740707755 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187855803736 0.0831039109588 226% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143323907284 0.0758088955206 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.474572944966 0.150359130593 316% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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