Universities should require students to take courses only within those fields they are interested in studying.
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Task: Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
My essay:
Students could take courses who's background looks relevant to their major. Attending to the universities tuition can be expensive. However, students relied on the tuition in order to pay their fees. Their benefits throughout universities are the environment and observe how big they really are.
The reason that Universities should require students taking courses depends on their levels of fields. Even when any universities are expensive, they could try hard to obtain a degree. I heard that San Jose State or Stanford University has a good amount of Computer Science in their department. In addition, when looking at their website, it contains resourses, news, and entertainments for everyone who is interested in their fields. Based on their major requirements, students follow their schedule to take the required courses. However, taking courses at a community college is cheaper; they could take courses within the field so they could move on to their next career. The only disadvantages are students who have special needs and only obtaining a lower degree in some major. Students who did not go well should repeat the course for a better grade; however, their grade will permanently remain in their record. The only limited benefit is obtaining an associate degree is adequate, but that is not enough in their career.
Throughout their higher education, most people have seen the news regarding their tuition fees are mostly flunctuating. The universities argued that how the universities such as masters program and undergraduates are higher in cost. In order to settle the higher education, they make a petition to lower the tuition fees so that everyone has to agree with via change.org. It feels like the protestors are in a crowd of cutting tax budget and educational fees.
Students depending on their level of fields could advance to their next career. The only needs are they have to be trained in their career. Their course projects are definitely a plus in their major. Whenever they make effort in their course project, the better they show performance on their career. The entry-level career can assist students to jumpstart their career.
I definitely Universities require students to take courses within those fields who are interested in. Indeed University tuition can be a higher education in the width to set their goals. Depending on their skill level, they jumpstart their career as long as they get a decent offer from a job; therefore, their life will set apart on their goals forever.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, really, regarding, so, therefore, well, as to, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 33.0505617978 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2414.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 462.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22510822511 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63618218583 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73827574991 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487012987013 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 729.0 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0980300295 60.3974514979 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.2142857143 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 23.4991977007 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.21951772744 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296216740001 0.243740707755 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989694023553 0.0831039109588 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116121001849 0.0758088955206 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138107787934 0.150359130593 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110347168512 0.0667264976115 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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