Pristine wood should be preserve in their natural state at the cost of economical gain. There is steep decrease in forests, trees and wildlife; it is topic which demand focus and attention. A government must preserve it’s wildness area and I would agree with them.
Firstly, begin with the thought of preserving pristine wood, it is a magnificent idea. For economic gain, human can’t be selfish to cut down the forest and snitch the habitats of animals and other living organisms. From preserving the pristine wood, species of extinct animals and precious woodland can be saved. Example, species called pink head ducks are nearly extincted from southern part of the Asian contents. Conserving their habitats is benefits for the nature.
Secondly, woodland are the part of earth ecosystem that balance the relation between environment and living organisms. Human had a special affinity with woodland. Humans are always pleased for what forests gives us through nature. They are adding the advantageousness into land and surrounding. Disturbance or imbalance in the environment due to deterioration of the woodland causes main impact to the environment. There is disruption in food chain system. Example, prey species frequently overgraze the plant life and become overpopulated with the removal of their primary predators. The natural hierarchy disturbed and it causing nature calamities, global warning and ecological crisis. So, to overcome these situations, proper laws are put into action for preservation.
However, developing such areas increases rate of economy of state. Developing industries or factories in such areas gives chances to employments. There is a improvement of infrastructure of surrounding areas. Lifestyle modification take place in development. By making them open to public for sight seeing with limited interaction bring good charm to fund of government. Finally, it can be said that by developing these areas, it leads to potential economic gain of the nation but these growth is temporary and in the long run, the resources and balance wilderness provide became void and the people of nation might have to pay consequences. These days, many NGOs have started wilderness camps that teach young students about the importance of the environment and the ways to protect it. This is a commendable initiative as these things should be taught to every student right in the beginning.
To conclude, it is responsibility of the government and the human being of the planet, to preserve what mother nature has provides to us and not malevolent it. So, such laws should be implemented by the government to protect the woodlands.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 25, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'preserved'?
Suggestion: preserved
Pristine wood should be preserve in their natural state at the cost of e...
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Line 1, column 218, Rule ID: IT_IS[10]
Message: Did you mean 'its' (possessive pronoun) instead of 'it's' (=it is)?
Suggestion: its
...d attention. A government must preserve it’s wildness area and I would agree with th...
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Line 5, column 273, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hey are adding the advantageousness into land and surrounding. Disturbance or imb...
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Line 5, column 714, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ecological crisis. So, to overcome these situations, proper laws are put into act...
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Line 6, column 156, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... gives chances to employments. There is a improvement of infrastructure of surrou...
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Line 6, column 482, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this growth' or 'these growths'?
Suggestion: this growth; these growths
...tential economic gain of the nation but these growth is temporary and in the long run, the r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2242.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 419.0 442.535393258 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3508353222 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93557832232 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579952267303 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 690.3 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.1885244668 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.037037037 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5185185185 23.4991977007 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 5.21951772744 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0779904654851 0.243740707755 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0199220931628 0.0831039109588 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0257055155566 0.0758088955206 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0425401571957 0.150359130593 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178870597452 0.0667264976115 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 100.480337079 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 25, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'preserved'?
Suggestion: preserved
Pristine wood should be preserve in their natural state at the cost of e...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 218, Rule ID: IT_IS[10]
Message: Did you mean 'its' (possessive pronoun) instead of 'it's' (=it is)?
Suggestion: its
...d attention. A government must preserve it’s wildness area and I would agree with th...
^^^^
Line 5, column 273, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hey are adding the advantageousness into land and surrounding. Disturbance or imb...
^^^^
Line 5, column 714, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ecological crisis. So, to overcome these situations, proper laws are put into act...
^^
Line 6, column 156, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... gives chances to employments. There is a improvement of infrastructure of surrou...
^
Line 6, column 482, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this growth' or 'these growths'?
Suggestion: this growth; these growths
...tential economic gain of the nation but these growth is temporary and in the long run, the r...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2242.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 419.0 442.535393258 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3508353222 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93557832232 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579952267303 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 690.3 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.1885244668 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.037037037 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5185185185 23.4991977007 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 5.21951772744 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0779904654851 0.243740707755 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0199220931628 0.0831039109588 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0257055155566 0.0758088955206 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0425401571957 0.150359130593 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178870597452 0.0667264976115 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 100.480337079 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.