The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Asking questions to those in authority is crucial for the growth of the organisation. I mostly agree with the prompt that it is indispensable for the people to question the respected authorities. Following are the two reasons and a concession to substantiate this thesis.
It is of paramount importance for the citizens of a country to question the government, in all aspects like economy, secularity and international relations, to preclude it from becoming authoritarian, and keeping a check on the nation's progress. For instance, media is called a crucial pillar of democracy, and this representation is true because the main purpose of the media houses is to convey the information regarding a nation's progress to it's people. If a nation is declining or it's government is failing to accomplish the promises, made during the elections, it the duty of media to inform the citizens about it. This information is so power that it can lead to the collapse of the government, and as people would be instigated to cause a rebellion. Moreover, Right to Information act in India, allows any. citizen to question the government regarding any issue, any deal, or any amendments made, consequently leading to a total transparency regarding the functioning of the government. Due this the government would be more cautious, and the corruption will decline. Therefore, the above examples illustrates that providing people or an organisation with power to question the authority will hinder the people in power to go off track and become autocratic.
Moreover, when the population starts questioning the authorities, they give up their oblivious nature towards the system and thus, become more aware about the changes of the amendments occurring in the organisation. For example, if more people start questioning the government on each and every issues, they will be more aware of the issue, and there would be an environment to consciousness among the nation. As we know that, having information and knowledge is power, thereby augmenting the power of it's citizens. Like, the people would more aware of their fundamental rights, and can protest if those are breached. Moreover, when more people are interested in the politics, the voter turn out also increases, as they would have their opinions to be represented. Thus, the above example shows that when people start question the authorities, they become in curious about the organisation and system, which would in turn have a positive impact holistically.
However, in some specific cases and situations, questioning authorities can be detrimental towards the well-being of the society. In particular, when people excessively start question the government regarding petty issues, then most of the time is wasted in resolving them, which in turn inhibits the core issues and problems to be solved. But, I believe that excess of everything is harmful, thereby we should not eschew the fact that providing people with strength of asking questions will lead to progress in most of the cases.
Conclusively, questioning the authority is subjective, and some people think can cause more conflicts rather than resolutions. However, I think that when number of people questioning the authorities increase, it will be beneficent for the nation.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 815, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Citizen
...o Information act in India, allows any. citizen to question the government regarding an...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 231, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...horities increase, it will be beneficent for the nation.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, i think, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 58.6224719101 123% => OK
Nominalization: 28.0 12.9106741573 217% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2768.0 2235.4752809 124% => OK
No of words: 523.0 442.535393258 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29254302103 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78217453174 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07991482919 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.456978967495 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 861.3 704.065955056 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 8.0 1.77640449438 450% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1970994413 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.818181818 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7727272727 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.40909090909 5.21951772744 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194145569959 0.243740707755 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064922235031 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440194324059 0.0758088955206 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131427721972 0.150359130593 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277757767074 0.0667264976115 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 14.1392134831 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 133.0 100.480337079 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 815, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Citizen
...o Information act in India, allows any. citizen to question the government regarding an...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 231, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...horities increase, it will be beneficent for the nation.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, i think, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 58.6224719101 123% => OK
Nominalization: 28.0 12.9106741573 217% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2768.0 2235.4752809 124% => OK
No of words: 523.0 442.535393258 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29254302103 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78217453174 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07991482919 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.456978967495 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 861.3 704.065955056 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 8.0 1.77640449438 450% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1970994413 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.818181818 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7727272727 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.40909090909 5.21951772744 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194145569959 0.243740707755 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064922235031 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440194324059 0.0758088955206 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131427721972 0.150359130593 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277757767074 0.0667264976115 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 14.1392134831 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 133.0 100.480337079 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.