The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Statement is little difficult to discuss as it may lead to big controversy but I think authority is made to look after the society. I agree with the statement that society is enhanced when many people question society. People have right to question authority and authority have to answer them back.
However, some time authority abhors questions ask by society because they think that people are wasting their time asking question. But when authority becomes corrupt that time many question asked by the society is being unanswered. To keep authority on track of work society should question the authority about their work. Because authority is made for people and if people are not satisfied with the work of authority than, they have their right to ask question and authority in bond to give answer. For instance, consider that there are some corrupt officer in authority and because of them authority is not able to do their work before deadline than society is dissatisfied with the work of authority and asking them question is such situation corrupt officer may get pressurised and show their true face in front of everyone.
Secondly, if authority thinks that they are doing great job and society is satisfied with their work than several question to authority from society will clear their false assumption and authority will get clear idea what society wants from them and how much they have progress. Questions from society to authority will help authority to work more efficiently because they know that they are bond to answer society about their work at the end of the day as they are working for them.
In conclusion, I think that authority can only work more efficiently when society questions authority about their work and society can only develop or enhanced properly when authority work properly and this can only happen when people in society ask questions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 179, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun question seems to be countable; consider using: 'many questions'.
Suggestion: many questions
...hen authority becomes corrupt that time many question asked by the society is being unanswere...
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Line 3, column 555, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'officers'?
Suggestion: officers
...e, consider that there are some corrupt officer in authority and because of them author...
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Line 5, column 108, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun question seems to be countable; consider using: 'several questions'.
Suggestion: several questions
...ciety is satisfied with their work than several question to authority from society will clear th...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...when people in society ask questions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 313.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06709265176 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4396689963 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 215.323595506 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.402555910543 0.4932671777 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.0 704.065955056 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.9066985301 60.3974514979 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.181818182 118.986275619 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4545454545 23.4991977007 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 5.21951772744 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206960488521 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128969021774 0.0831039109588 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707989712459 0.0758088955206 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161575428026 0.150359130593 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470808903506 0.0667264976115 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 14.1392134831 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.8420337079 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.38706741573 84% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 100.480337079 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.7820224719 144% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.