The claim of the author pretty much logical.The author claimed that questioning authority by many people enhanced the well-being of a society.I have a supportive view towards this claim.To approve this claim we need established how questioning authority will enhance the well-being of the society.|And we should also aware of the greater consequences of questioning authority in negative or positive aspect.
There is a plenty of example in human history how questioning authority actually move forward the human civilization.For example gallelio 16th century scientist whose scientific finding questioning the authority of that time.He found that earth is moving around the sun and its not only moving but also a planet of the sun.This findings actually against the authority of that time.Due to questioning authority he may faced trail,brook humiliation and incarcerated a longer period his life.But the end gallelio win and people after his generation accept him with great veneration.Now we know that much impact of his findings in our modern civilization.
We can also think about our modern world.Currently most of the country in the world have a democratic political system.so in todays world many people have access to question authority than before.Considering bangladesh ,in 2004 government of bangladesh made a accord with Asia Energy for coal mining in countrys north.The accord permit the open mining system to the company.but due to open mining the people of that area will suffer very much.because they have evacuate their home .they will lost their land and have to migrate in other place.so their livlihood in danger .At that time the people of that area questioning the authority and organize protest to cancel the permit of the company for open mining.A|fter heavy protest the government cancel the permit of open mining system .
so we can say that well-being of the society actually enhanced when many people questiong authority
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- The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and s 50
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'well', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.301282051282 0.240241500013 125% => OK
Verbs: 0.141025641026 0.157235817809 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0961538461538 0.0880659088768 109% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0448717948718 0.0497285424764 90% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0544871794872 0.0444667217837 123% => OK
Prepositions: 0.137820512821 0.12292977631 112% => OK
Participles: 0.0352564102564 0.0406280797675 87% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.0227626921 2.79330140395 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0192307692308 0.030933414821 62% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.11858974359 0.0997080785238 119% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0224358974359 0.0249443105267 90% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0160256410256 0.0148568991511 108% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1952.0 2732.02544248 71% => OK
No of words: 307.0 452.878318584 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.35830618893 6.0361032391 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.58838876751 91% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.420195439739 0.366273622748 115% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.293159609121 0.280924506359 104% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.228013029316 0.200843997647 114% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.162866449511 0.132149295362 123% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0227626921 2.79330140395 108% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 219.290929204 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530944625407 0.48968727796 108% => OK
Word variations: 54.6170763417 55.4138127331 99% => OK
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6194690265 19% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 76.75 23.380412469 328% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 261.497131915 59.4972553346 440% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 488.0 141.124799967 346% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 76.75 23.380412469 328% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.0 0.674092028746 297% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.21349557522 537% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 106.065960912 51.4728631049 206% => OK
Elegance: 1.97333333333 1.64882698954 120% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.456666759079 0.391690518653 117% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.269629431935 0.123202303941 219% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0526398016351 0.077325440228 68% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 1.0 0.547984918172 182% => Sentence paragraph similarity is high.
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 3.76494945394e-16 0.149214159877 0% => Sentences are similar to each other in a paragraph.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.328213246762 0.161403998019 203% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458630552476 0.0892212321368 51% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.342074596339 0.385218514788 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0760771045522 0.0692045440612 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.328213246762 0.275328986314 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458630552476 0.0653680567796 70% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.4325221239 29% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 7.22455752212 42% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 4.0 13.5995575221 29% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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