During the student life most students faces a common difficulty to choose a field of study.They caught into the dilema between their interest and the availabity of job in that field.Its natural thing for everyone to think about their economic security in future.I think everyone should choose their field by considering their capability and their existing circumustance.
Its best thing for anyone if choose a field according to their talents and interest and there is a higher probability for him to success in his career.Because if anyone choose a field according to their interest he will never boored or despirited with his/her field. He will never feel about wasting time if he give extra hour for his work and at the same time his economic security will be protected.
Now think about a secnario,a person comming from a poor family and strugling for livlihood.For that person he have no way to think about his interest or talent .His main concern to over come this proverty and to support his family.So in that case he should choose a field whcih have very availabilty of job after his graduation.
In another secnario if anyone have interest any such field which have not much scope to build a better career.Think if anyone have interest if pali and buddist studies.After his/her graduation if he failed to earn a faculty position in any university or college then his life will be measarable.Because this field have not much career option.
Another thing is that if anyone choose a field according to job availability then he should cautious about that fileds current and future circumustance.Four years ago there is a huge demand of biotechnologist .but in current secnario the pharma company and research institute full of biotechnologist and todays graduates have little scope to work.
So its best for student if any student choose a field according to his interest and also have very high job availability.but everyone havent blessed with same luck.For that condition its wise to compromise between their interest and future economic security
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'another thing', 'i think']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.28818443804 0.240241500013 120% => OK
Verbs: 0.135446685879 0.157235817809 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0893371757925 0.0880659088768 101% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0374639769452 0.0497285424764 75% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0806916426513 0.0444667217837 181% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.129682997118 0.12292977631 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0317002881844 0.0406280797675 78% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.93496241935 2.79330140395 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0403458213256 0.030933414821 130% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0893371757925 0.0997080785238 90% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0201729106628 0.0249443105267 81% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0115273775216 0.0148568991511 78% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2064.0 2732.02544248 76% => OK
No of words: 339.0 452.878318584 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.08849557522 6.0361032391 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.58838876751 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.362831858407 0.366273622748 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.253687315634 0.280924506359 90% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.182890855457 0.200843997647 91% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.103244837758 0.132149295362 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93496241935 2.79330140395 105% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 219.290929204 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47197640118 0.48968727796 96% => OK
Word variations: 48.0607259168 55.4138127331 87% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6194690265 34% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 48.4285714286 23.380412469 207% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 75.0917805769 59.4972553346 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 294.857142857 141.124799967 209% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.4285714286 23.380412469 207% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.674092028746 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.21349557522 537% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 73.797302992 51.4728631049 143% => OK
Elegance: 1.77272727273 1.64882698954 108% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253064620967 0.391690518653 65% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.216205332176 0.123202303941 175% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0519875494344 0.077325440228 67% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.919213806906 0.547984918172 168% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.141369052146 0.149214159877 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146258011802 0.161403998019 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103788229922 0.0892212321368 116% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.254490700285 0.385218514788 66% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0472024002547 0.0692045440612 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163110540173 0.275328986314 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0994398278815 0.0653680567796 152% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.4325221239 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.30420353982 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 7.22455752212 97% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 7.0 13.5995575221 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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