When old buildings stand on ground that modern planners feel could be better used for modern purposes, modern development should be given precedence over the preservation of historic buildings.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
one of the most important rights of the people is the accommodation. but now a day it is becoming scarce because of the rapid growth of population. but unfortunately the population is not uniformly distributed throughout the world. some of the countries are highly dense compared to others. even within the same country some places or cities are denser than the others. so accommodation is a problem in those areas. In those cases the difficult decisions have to make regarding the fate of the historic buildings. Here the author speaks in favor of preserving the historic buildings rather than to demolish them to build modern ones. I do agree with the suggestions for the following reasons.
it is an era of modern technology. people are building skyscrapers. A lot of technologies are available to build those. What we need is to make the best use of those technologies and build some skyscrapers. because when new building are made demolishing the historic one then it might happen that the accommodation is still inadequate. then the ultimate plan would be to build skyscrapers. so better to start that trend now rather destroy the historic buildings. that’s why large cities have multistoried buildings to meet the need of accommodation.
it is also possible to make a city plan preserving the historic buildings. In that case it will increase the aesthetic value of the city. For example Rome still has a lot of historic places that have not only increased the beauty of the city but also has attracted a lot of tourists. This strategy will make a contribution to the economy of the nations. Dhaka, the most populated city in the world, has still maintained their historic places and the establishment even though there is a severe accommodation problem. The city engineers have decided to go for multistoried building without destroying those.
historic buildings are not so frequent. so question arises regarding the contribution to the solution of the accommodation problems if those are replaced by the modern one. I think it will be a very minor percentage. so it is better to preserve those establishments. Apart from that those buildings also represent the history of the nation. Sometimes they represent the pride of the nation or a civilization that has been extinct. In that sense they might be very good educational materials.
In conclusion I would like to say there are so many reasons to claim that the historic buildings should be grounded and should be replaced by the modern one. but the fact is that it is going to destroy the history of the nation, the history that is cherished by the mass people. At the same time the replacement of the historic building might not solve the problem permanently. so we need to look for a permanent solution. And in that case it is important to make use of other unutilized places and to preserve the historic buildings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, regarding, so, still, then, apart from, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2410.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 488.0 442.535393258 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93852459016 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70007681154 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96691591212 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.428278688525 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 765.9 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 35.0 20.2370786517 173% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 23.0359550562 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.426686374 60.3974514979 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.8571428571 118.986275619 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.9428571429 23.4991977007 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.74285714286 5.21951772744 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204692792058 0.243740707755 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510699518724 0.0831039109588 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528726328682 0.0758088955206 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129163477028 0.150359130593 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517768778472 0.0667264976115 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 14.1392134831 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 48.8420337079 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.78 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.38706741573 86% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 11.2143820225 64% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.