When old buildings stand on ground that modern planners feel could be better used for modern purposes, modern development should be given precedence over the preservation of historic buildings.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
we should replace old historical buildings with modern buildings , though some people think it will remove that historical importance of the place i still believe it would be better to use the place to build new and modular buildings instead of old ones , the reasons for the agreement are stated in the following paragraps.
Firstly, there are many safety issues when comes to old buildings as they have been there for a long time their structure might become weak which is a big safety concern for the people as it might fall any time . so we should instead demolish them and construct some new building which is strong and safe, for example we recently saw a museum collapsed in our city and a lot of people were hurt in that accident , to avoid these kind of accidents we need to avoid buildings that are way older and construct new ones which are safe.
Secondly, there is also an environmental benifit in destroying old buildings and build new ones , like if we were to construct a new building we need to find some place for that and that place need to be made by cutting some trees in that area ,so if we can reuse the space previously used for old and historical buildings we can prevent cutting of lot of trees which will be a advantage to environment. for example recently some part of nallamala forest which is one of the largest forest in India was flattened to make way for a new mall , so instead of this if they would have demolished some old buildings in some area which are not in use any more and use that to make the mall it would have saved a lot of trees.
thirdly, the energy consumptions of old buildings will also be more as they were build a long time ago and at that time there were very few energy saving machanisms in place, if we could make a new modular and energy efficient buildings instead of these old buildings it would reduce the energy consumption drastically , for example old buildings do not have a central air conditioning so we need to have the air conditioners for every room which will increase the energy consumption , if we can build a new building with buildin central air conditioning it will reduce the cost and energy consumed by the building.
However, if we replace old historical buildings with new ones the emotional and historical value associated with that building will be lost , like if a building has been in a place for a very long time(over a 1000 years) the people in that place will build a lot of emotional attachment with that building and if we try to replace that with a new modern building that value will be removed which may cause problems with the people.
All in all, there are both advantages and disadvantages with replacing of old buildings with new ones , but if we think in an economic and safety perseptive it would be better to replace old buildings as it will be safe , but on the contrary we will loose the emotional value associated with it.
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- When old buildings stand on ground that modern planners feel could be better used for modern purposes modern development should be given precedence over the preservation of historic buildings Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you a 50
- When old buildings stand on ground that modern planners feel could be better used for modern purposes modern development should be given precedence over the preservation of historic buildings Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you a 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, for example, kind of, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 28.0 12.4196629213 225% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.3162921348 194% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2405.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 528.0 442.535393258 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55492424242 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79356345386 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53243830982 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.361742424242 0.4932671777 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 761.4 704.065955056 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 66.0 23.0359550562 287% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.873216232 60.3974514979 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 300.625 118.986275619 253% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 66.0 23.4991977007 281% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.875 5.21951772744 304% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 7.80617977528 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270753421138 0.243740707755 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157910866829 0.0831039109588 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571976726102 0.0758088955206 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181824818724 0.150359130593 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518066983054 0.0667264976115 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.0 14.1392134831 233% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 21.41 48.8420337079 44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.7 12.1743820225 219% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.0 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.8971910112 147% => OK
gunning_fog: 28.4 11.2143820225 253% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 27.0 11.7820224719 229% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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