When old buildings stand on ground that modern planners feel could be better
used for modern purposes, modern development should be given precedence over
the preservation of historic buildings.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the
statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and
supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or
might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Lifestyle of the general public changes drastically over time. This trend is also visible in case of housing preferences. In the ancient times, humans used to live in caves and huts; then we built various kinds of medieval structures, and now we live in apartments and sky-scrapers. As the technology developed and the housing needs sky-rocketed, we started finding more efficient housing solutions, to suit the need to the present generation. This sometimes leads to the need to renovate entire structures from the historic times. Some might argue that, we need to preserve architectural styles from the olden times, and hence it is not correct to erase these structures for building modern houses. But I think that it is sometimes necessary to bid farewell to older things in order to progress into the newer times.
Due to the ever-increasing population of the globe, it is becoming very crucial for our houses and other infrastructure to be more compact, yet have a touch of aestheticity to get a good residential experience. These features are rarely seen in older structures, where the primary focus was to create sufficient-for-life kind of residences. These need to be replaced with the more efficient buildings, to satisfy the needs to the average person.
Any nation which aspires to become a dominant force in the world has to embrace the modern way of doing things, in order to ensure its overall progress. Hence, development projects sometimes lead to demolition of historic buildings, which form hurdles in the newer plan proposed to develop the region socially and economically. These kind of projects must be carried out without hesitation, if the structure does not resemble any precious architectural style of the olden times, and was merely a common housing structure.
But sometimes, we are driven by our desire for luxury, which prompts us to make terrible mistakes with irrepairable losses. Suppose a big hotel is about to be built in place of a historical marvel which is one of the rarest of its architectural types. This is not good for the locality, even though it might benefit the youth economically by producing jobs, as the local people would feel the demolition of the structure as a part of their very own selves being trodden upon. And considering the economic factors, the historical marvel can be converted into an elite tourist spot, which would not only ensure its preservation, but also reward the local communites preserving it by providing new job opportunities.
In conclusion, I feel that modern development must be given precedence over preservation of historical buildings only if it is absolutely necessary for the growth of the nation, and not merely out of the greed of few people who care only about their own welfare. If a historical site is of tremendous cultural or historical importance, it must be preserved by converting it into a tourist attraction.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 18, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
Lifestyle of the general public changes drastically over time. This tre...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 329, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'These kinds'?
Suggestion: This kind; These kinds
...p the region socially and economically. These kind of projects must be carried out without...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 128, Rule ID: ABSOLUTELY_ESSENTIAL[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessary'.
Suggestion: necessary
...n of historical buildings only if it is absolutely necessary for the growth of the nation, and not m...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, then, well, as to, i feel, i think, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2438.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 479.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08977035491 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67825486995 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02096988371 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 215.323595506 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530271398747 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 788.4 704.065955056 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.77640449438 507% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8472065513 60.3974514979 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.315789474 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2105263158 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42105263158 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234237458881 0.243740707755 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641996996135 0.0831039109588 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584624321585 0.0758088955206 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132644638137 0.150359130593 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697074506254 0.0667264976115 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.1392134831 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 100.480337079 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 18, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
Lifestyle of the general public changes drastically over time. This tre...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 329, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'These kinds'?
Suggestion: This kind; These kinds
...p the region socially and economically. These kind of projects must be carried out without...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 128, Rule ID: ABSOLUTELY_ESSENTIAL[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessary'.
Suggestion: necessary
...n of historical buildings only if it is absolutely necessary for the growth of the nation, and not m...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, then, well, as to, i feel, i think, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2438.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 479.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08977035491 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67825486995 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02096988371 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 215.323595506 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530271398747 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 788.4 704.065955056 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.77640449438 507% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8472065513 60.3974514979 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.315789474 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2105263158 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42105263158 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234237458881 0.243740707755 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641996996135 0.0831039109588 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584624321585 0.0758088955206 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132644638137 0.150359130593 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697074506254 0.0667264976115 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.1392134831 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 100.480337079 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.