Women and men have inherent physical differences, they are not equally suitable for many tasks.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with the topic. In what way can your stand be challenged. Discuss giving suitable examples.
When two things are different, an equal stand for both would be unjust. Indeed, there are innate biological differences between men and women. A man's body is not capable of bearing child. Women are solely potential enough to do so. If "task" in author's claim is such broad a term, definitely there are tasks wherein one gender exhibits superiority over other. Does that mean that women must be marginalized in the work domain? No. While there are some tasks which are well suited for males, but when we scrutinize our workspace exhaustively, we realize that such gender specific role are very few. In most of the cases, men and women are equally eligible candidates for most of the economic jobs available out there.
Kangana Ranaut, a Padmashree winning Indian actress said in an interview, "Women must use their sharp parts to compete with the other gender. Fight with your brain and not soft physique." Truly, if we come to domain of cerebral skills. Both men and women are at par with each other. For example, in education we witness how both of the sides are equally appropriate and their mental faculty shows no bias. The world today has shifted from industrialisation to service sector. Major share of jobs is seen in the IT sector, research. analytics, software, science, finance etc. Therefore, women is well suited and as expedient as men to qualify for those jobs.
However, the author and other opponents might point out to the jobs like those n the coal mines, industries, laborious jobs, etc. Poeple would also point towards the ignoble and shameful but grim reality prevalant in the world-- the sex industry--which is also gender specific. But, the statistics say that the contribution of females is 95 percent that of the males, when it comes to laborious construction jobs in India. Almost 50 of the laborious farmers are women in India. Mary Kom has won olympics in the most male dominated field wrestling, followed by Sakshi grabbing olympic medals for wrestling in 2016. So, oracticle senario is something different. Thus, attributing tasks to a particular gender is not justified.
In sum, though there may be innate differences in the two genders. The differences are engrained more by sociological cultures rather than nature. For most of the jobs both women and men are equally suited and the tasks which favours one over the other are few, indeed negligible.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'well', 'while', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.257995735608 0.240241500013 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.132196162047 0.157235817809 84% => OK
Adjectives: 0.100213219616 0.0880659088768 114% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0554371002132 0.0497285424764 111% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0191897654584 0.0444667217837 43% => OK
Prepositions: 0.113006396588 0.12292977631 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0298507462687 0.0406280797675 73% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.74744844488 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0170575692964 0.030933414821 55% => OK
Particles: 0.00213219616205 0.0016655270985 128% => OK
Determiners: 0.0831556503198 0.0997080785238 83% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0127931769723 0.0249443105267 51% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0170575692964 0.0148568991511 115% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2410.0 2732.02544248 88% => OK
No of words: 401.0 452.878318584 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.00997506234 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.58838876751 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.341645885287 0.366273622748 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.254364089776 0.280924506359 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.159600997506 0.200843997647 79% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.124688279302 0.132149295362 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74744844488 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 219.290929204 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583541147132 0.48968727796 119% => OK
Word variations: 69.6544945216 55.4138127331 126% => OK
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6194690265 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.8518518519 23.380412469 64% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3359417232 59.4972553346 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2592592593 141.124799967 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8518518519 23.380412469 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.407407407407 0.674092028746 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.21349557522 77% => OK
Readability: 40.2882608294 51.4728631049 78% => OK
Elegance: 1.9381443299 1.64882698954 118% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264164567019 0.391690518653 67% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0684465103801 0.123202303941 56% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0695214095108 0.077325440228 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.389563189739 0.547984918172 71% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.157887650539 0.149214159877 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865036976494 0.161403998019 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477560812298 0.0892212321368 54% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.368432427861 0.385218514788 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0216976593557 0.0692045440612 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198785760703 0.275328986314 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031803600237 0.0653680567796 49% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.4325221239 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.30420353982 151% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88274336283 246% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.70907079646 258% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.5995575221 118% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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