You have borrowed something from your friend for a party and unfortunately it was damaged. Write a letter to your friend to apologise and say – What and when did you borrow? – What happened to it? Why? – What do you suggest to do about it?

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Jack, I hope this letter finds you well. Thank...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 241, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'belongings'.
Suggestion: belongings
...rtunately, they had damaged not only my personal belongings such as classic cassettes, but also you...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o hearing from you soon. Best wishes, Carl Whitely s
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well, as to, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 12.4196629213 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 58.6224719101 22% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 802.0 2235.4752809 36% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 165.0 442.535393258 37% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86060606061 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 4.55969084622 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86539147754 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 215.323595506 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.69696969697 0.4932671777 141% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 704.065955056 35% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 11.0 23.0359550562 48% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.4959685572 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.2857142857 118.986275619 48% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.7857142857 23.4991977007 50% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.21428571429 5.21951772744 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24226210958 0.243740707755 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755108564419 0.0831039109588 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407274167108 0.0758088955206 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158771823283 0.150359130593 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00778129095169 0.0667264976115 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 14.1392134831 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 48.8420337079 141% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 12.1743820225 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.02 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 100.480337079 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 11.2143820225 57% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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