advertisement and high sales
These days, thanks to development technology, there are different kinds of ways to advertise popular consumer goods. People are bombed by a lot of advertisement most of the time from early in the morning to late at night. They have to visit a lot of big billboards which are situated in the big cities. More over, there are different kinds of television commercials which are broadcast most of the time before, during and after each program.
It is clear that these kinds of advertisements provide people with the golden opportunity to increase their information as regards some products. People can develop their selective thanks to advent of advertising industry. Furthermore, in some cases some people are tempted to purchase some kinds of products that they do not need which will eventually lead to increasing popular consumer goods sharply. Thanks to advertisements, many rival companies try to improve their quality of commodities and find better ways to advertise their own goods.
On the other hand, it can not be overlooked that many people have certain budget for purchasing different kinds of products. They do not pay attention to several advertisements which are related to luxury products like some expensive cell phones. Although several companies try to increase their advertisements on certain goods, people who do not have enough money do not buy them.
In conclusion, I think that although advertisement plays important role to introduce different kinds of products, people pay utmost attention to what they need. They try to prioritize their demand based on their budgets.
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