After leaving school or university, young people should choose a job or career that they love, rather than one that pays the best salary. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
One of the most controversial issues in today is that fresh graduates from university will choose job which provides the highest salary that they do not like or choosing job with low salary which they love it. I believe that it depends on how people face this condition.
Nowadays, many reasons for people who choose to work in the big companies which allocate the highest salary are uncomfortable with their jobs. It is true that people who receive much money are able to be easy to purchase essential goods such as cars and foods. Besides, they would change social status that they are more faced...
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flaws: Sentence-Sentence
flaws:
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.037 0.07
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Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 349 350
No. of Characters: 1667 1500
No. of Different Words: 179 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.322 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.777 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.57 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 105 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 73 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 51 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 34 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.368 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.59 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.368 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.301 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.461 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.037 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
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