Essay topics:
The bar chart shows the relationship
between age and crime and the second is a pie
chart showing the types of reported crime in the
UK in 2002.
Answer: The given polygraph manifest the information about violation in the UK for the year 2002 where provided pie-chart gives the types of property crime for the same year and nation.
It can be inferred that overall committed crime was meager under the age of 12 However, It further shows abrupt for the teenagers, adolescents and adults respectively ; which followed downward trend after the almost one and half of a man's average life.
As crime rate was negligible up to the age of children although it commenced from the age of 12 with 5 % crime rate which ahead reveals the ey...
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Sentence: The given polygraph manifest the information about violation in the UK for the year 2002 where provided pie-chart gives the types of property crime for the same year and nation.
Description: The fragment polygraph manifest the is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace manifest with verb, past tense
Sentence: It can be inferred that overall committed crime was meager under the age of 12 However, It further shows abrupt for the teenagers, adolescents and adults respectively ; which followed downward trend after the almost one and half of a man's average life.
Description: The fragment the almost one is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace almost with adjective
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Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 5 10
No. of Words: 223 200
No. of Characters: 1045 1000
No. of Different Words: 135 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.864 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.686 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.473 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 65 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 50 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 33 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 18 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 44.6 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 20.155 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.4 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.543 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 1 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.185 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4