In many cities crime is increasing. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce crime levels?
As we have been living in advanced and developed age which gives many comforts and good living style to mortals as compare to bygone era but still there are some sins in our society, one of them is crime which is up surging day by day. I assert with the given statement due to umpteen reasons.
First and foremost reason of increasing in crime is an unemployment which enforced are youngsters to fall in this mud of darkness because due to computerization man work is shrinking like anything where computer is capable enough to do 10 times work than man do. As money would not be there so as usual...
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hello sir ...again i didn't
hello sir ...again i didn't get my errors becuz of grammatical concepts name.....are u syggesting that i should not use verbs after conjucyion or what..
Sentence: As we have been
Sentence: As we have been living in advanced and developed age which gives many comforts and good living style to mortals as compare to bygone era but still there are some sins in our society, one of them is crime which is up surging day by day.
Suggestion: style to mortals as compared to bygone
Sentence: First and foremost reason of increasing in crime is an unemployment which enforced are youngsters to fall in this mud of darkness because due to computerization man work is shrinking like anything where computer is capable enough to do 10 times work than man do.
Suggestion: unemployment which enforced youngsters to fall...(remove are)
Sentence: As we have been living in advanced and developed age which gives many comforts and good living style to mortals as compare to bygone era but still there are some sins in our society, one of them is crime which is up surging day by day.
Description: A conjunction, subordinating is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to as and compare
Sentence: First and foremost reason of increasing in crime is an unemployment which enforced are youngsters to fall in this mud of darkness because due to computerization man work is shrinking like anything where computer is capable enough to do 10 times work than man do.
Description: A WH-determiner is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to which and enforced
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Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.033 0.07
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 15
No. of Words: 331 350
No. of Characters: 1557 1500
No. of Different Words: 201 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.265 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.704 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.617 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 98 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 81 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 54 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 34 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 33.1 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 16.059 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.7 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.349 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.616 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.033 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5