The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries.
write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The given chart illustrates the difference amount of money spent by several countries on six types of consumer products within Europe.
The four Europe’s countries under view are namely Germany, Italy, France and Britain.
Obviously, the money the German uses for those goods are nearly equal with 150 thousand pounds, while Britain people are quite different at all. British spend the most money on photographic film with 170 thousand pounds approximately, but the least on personal stereos, 30 less than former. The money spending on toys is on a par with Italian and France.
All four countries’ people spend equally the same on personal stereos, while different on other type of goods. The chart also shows that British people spent the most of money on given consumer goods among all countries, occupying the longest bar in each category.
It may tell that British seem likely enjoying life by spending larger amount of money on consumer goods than others.
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The four Europe’s countries under view are namely Germany, Italy, France and Britain.
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