The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart compares the proportion of males and females getting post-school qualifications at various levels in Australia, in 1999. It can clearly be seen that, there are substantial differences at education levels of people in terms of gender.
The first glance at the chart reveals that women considerably lagged behind of men at getting skilled vocational diplomas (10% vs. 90%) in contrary, the amount of females with undergraduate certificates (70%) was significantly more in comparison with males holding them (30%). Furthermore, the number of bachelor’s degree holder women was marginal...
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- The diagrams below show two stages in the development of the mobile phone Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 82
- The charts below give information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000, and the marital status of adult Americans in two of the years.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where 80
- The bar chart below shows the results of a survey conducted by a personnel department at a major company. The survey was carried out on two groups of workers: those aged from 18-30 and those aged 45-60, and shows factors affecting their work performance. 89
- The charts show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers. 80
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