The chart below shows the sleep patterns of people in five different occupations according to a Canadian study.
Write a report for a university lecturer, describing the information below
The table gives information how much the sleep times done by five occupations in Canada. Those are student, truck driver, house wife/ full-time mother, business executives and doctor.
Generally, student and business executive have the disciplinary times for sleeping, while the other occupants have the irregular times for going to bed.
In detailed, the student spends the time for slumbering around eight hours. Conversely, the business executives have least time for sleeping. He just spends 6 hours. The interesting thing from the table is truck driver. He not only has the irregular times for sleeping but also get the little hours for taking a rest. The reason is probably that they must work hard and always be inside of their truck. The other amazing sight is house wife. She also has the short time for sleeping, occasionally at night and at noon. Perhaps, they have to look after their children and to give the excellent services for her husband. But, she has the same number as student’s sleeping time.
Then, doctor has the least time for going to bed, around 5 hours. It is because they have to help and check up his patients in irregular time.
To put them in a nutshell, the activity which uses much thinking has much regular time to sleep than uses the power.
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