Children can learn efficiently by watching television. Children should watch television regularly both in school and at home. Do you agree or disagree?
In this high technology era, television as one of sophisticated technology can provide all information and knowledge that we need. People, especially children, are able to catch new knowledge without touching a lot of books and doing something else everywhere that provides television. I totally support this statement and bring my own reasons.
First of all, television has many beneficial programs, such as BBC and School TV, for children. So, when children do not have any activities, they must be better to watch television than go somewhere and do something useless. For example, half of Indon...
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