Compare modern shopping centers to local markets and shops What way of shopping has more advantages for the people and the society

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Compare modern shopping centers to local markets and shops. What way of shopping has more advantages for the people and the society

Today, many people have an interest to go to a mall which is available at many places in big cities. While some citizens prefer to choose the mall because it is more comfortable, others think shopping in a traditional market has benefits. In these following paragraphs, I would explain how those might be the suitable option.

Most of the people believe one of the main advantages of shopping at the mall is to gain amenities. There, visitors will enjoy contemporary facilities such as air conditioner, restaurant, ATM, and play land, for their children. It is more appropriate for consumers who h...

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