In countries like Japan, the population is getting older, are the effects of aging population on society is negative or positive. Discuss both views and give your opinion
With the advent of science and healthcare life expectancy has been increased in recent few years. As a result there is a obvious incline in old age population in some countries like japan and Canada. Some people believes it has beneficial effect on society while some consider as a burden on society. This essay will illustrate both point of views .
On one side people think that old is gold. They have very convincing points. Firstly, they believe that old people are a symbol of wisdom and prosperity for next generation. Their experience and wisdom is helpful not only for their immediat...
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Sentence: In my opinion aging is a universal fact which has no individual control.So as soon as someone is healthy and active age is not a obstacle rather it is a productive event.
Suggestion: an obstacle
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