Crime is a problem all over the world. Some believe that crime prevention will make no difference, others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Nowadays, crime is overflowing every corner of our society and worse, the form and frequency of criminals are increasingly sophisticating. Indeed, they make major the majority of people feel that they are living in fear and they also suspect power of police to prevent the expansion of this problem. However, in my point of view, are we making it to be more serious than it is? In this topic, I am going to examine my view from both of sides.
On one side of coin, the main reason that convinces of some people believe sin prevention is impossible is criminals’ recklessness. They really organize...
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Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: replace 'a lot useful solution' to 'a lot useful solutions'
Description: The fragment it establish each is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace establish with verb, past tense
because it establish each civil defense team for each street of city.
Suggestion:because it is establishing each civil defense team for each street of city.
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