The diagram below show how chocolate is made and how the price of a chocolate bar is divided up among these involved in the process.
The pictures describe how to make nice chocolate and how far the price took apart in producing process and what stages should be passed to get good result.
There are four main stages in manufacturing chocolate are grinding, converting solid into liquid, being in industrial process, and finishing. The first stage, cocoa beans have to be ground and separated with wastes before continuing to the next step. The second, after grinding process, the cocoa comes into liquor process which will change solid becoming liquid cocoa. In the later step, there are two kinds of processes. The liquid cocoa can be processed by being inserted to industrial chocolate or pressing process. In the industrial chocolate, the cocoa will be added by sugar, cocoa butter, and other ingredients before being chocolate bar as final product. Pressing process will make liquid cocoa become two kinds of sharps, butter and powder cocoa. Cocoa butter is transported into industrial process and cocoa powder will be sent into food industry.
In conclusion, the cost of a chocolate bar will be affected by how process happens. Every step plays its role in determining the price of cocoa process, and the fee which is used in process will be calculated to get the proper price of a chocolate in market.
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