The two graphs below show the percentage of smokers and the consumption of alcohol in liters in selected countries for the period 1960 2000

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The two graphs below show the percentage of smokers and the consumption of alcohol in liters in selected countries, for the period 1960 – 2000.

The two graphs consist of three lines for each one and give information about condition of the proposition of people who were smoking cigarettes, and the number of alcohol consumption in three pointed countries.

Paying attention to the first block of pictures, three lines declined from 1960 onward. The first ten years, USA dived slightly, fell dramatically since 1970 until 1980 and plunged gradually like Japan and Holland. Overall, the human who became smoker time by time got better during four decades.

From the second graph, it can be seen that it describes the amount of alcohol consump...

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