Some people think that children should obey rules and do everything as their parents and teachers say. Others believe that children are controlled too much might be not well-prepared for their adult life.
It is true that parents and teachers make rules which should be obeyed by children for goodness. When children do what their parents say, they will be able to grow up well as their parents’ plan. Conversely, when their parents or tutors force and control pupils too much, it will cause negative impacts for children’s future life. This essay will explain more.
The parents or coaches have many strategies which they have planned well to support the children in order to grow up becoming a professional person. They play vital roles for young generation’s continuous world which they should plan as soon as possible because to be a good person needs long time process. Why should youth conduct what mother and father rule? The son and daughter still do not understand which it is true or not, so they do not care about damages of what they work. They tend to think of short-term purposes because their age is time to have fun, and find out new talents and abilities. Probably, some teachers or parents have prepared good strategies to accelerate their children being success. They will choose something best and provide what they need not what they want. They must arrange some regulations with understanding their capability. That is why the parents' advice should be followed by students as long as it is true or appropriate way.
On the other side, some people disagree that childhood is an era that determine their next time whether it will be great or terrible. A child has to be allowed freely to select what they need or want. If their parents forbid and manage their choices too much, it might kill their creativity, and the children tend to be follower. Then, top attention is that the scholars will be passive boy or girl who will contribute less than active person. Many people believe that if Adults are not given a lot of chances to point their desire, they will grow up slowly and be spoiled figure. If they do all everyday activities as what their biological parents want, some of them are not about to enjoy their recent life because of pressures, so they will not work or study seriously, but it will block process to reach their important dreams.
In conclusion, there are convincing arguments both for and against whether the children should obey parents’ instructions to do their habitual activities or doing what they want. A few people believe that the purpose of the advice is for children’s importance to challenge obstacles and problems in the life. In my mind, the youths just need friends, mother and father, to guide and encourage them in achieving their passions.
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