Fast food is developing more and more popular. It replaces other traditional food. Some people think it is good, some people disagree with it. What?s your opinion about it. Give some reason of your opinion.
Everything has two sides and the fast food is no exception. Many people, especially the younger, welcome this relatively new trend of eating. Others disagree and point out, that it has more negative effects than positive ones. In this essay, I am going to examine both points of view.
There is no doubt, that this junk food has a very delicious taste, which is mostly caused by artificial sweeteners. People, who justify this kind of food, say it has many advantages, for instance, you do not need to spend your whole lunch break for siting in a restaurant, because you can take your hamburger or ...
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