Human beings do not need to eat meat in order to maintain good health because they can get all their food needs from meatless products and meatless substances. A vegetarian diet is as healthy as a diet containing meat. Argue for or against the opinion above.
The most controversial issue today related to healthy nutrition is the vegetarian diet. Some people justify killing animals through a need of meat as an unreplaceable food. Others disagree and point out that meatless products contain all important substances. In this essay, I am going to examine both sides of arguments.
People, who tend to think that meat is expendable, say there is no reason to hunt and kill animals for eating them, because all we need, we can get from plant nutrition. Moreover it is also healthier than meat, for instance, oat meals contain lots of complex carbohydrates, ...
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