General Training Task 1
You are looking for a part-time job.
Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter
• introduce yourself
• explain what sort of job you would like
• and say what experience and skills you have
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a student of Waituna collage and I am writing this letter to inquire information about an out-off school job.
I am also a resident of Waitomo city who is studying at third year's class. In my school I have joined several activities such as, a drama group and a karate club.
On the next term before my course will start, I will have a four-week holiday. It would be beneficial to me, if I could fill my time with an useful activity like taking a job. I would like to work as a shop assistant in a grocery store I love this duty because I like to meet customers and help them to choose the best product, and one more important is the money which will support my demands as a student. Moreover, I would prefer, if I work in the morning until afternoon. After my vacation time finish, It will be nice if I could continue this an irregular job after school time.
In addition, I already have myriad experiences doing that task. In first grade, I got a job in a fish shop and then in the following year, I joined as a shop attendant at flower outlet. Other things, I have the skills to speak in three languages, Arabic, English, and Vietnamese.
Thank you in advance, I am looking forward to hear a good news from you.
Yours faithfully,
War Wir Wur
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 12 10
No. of Words: 232 200
No. of Characters: 957 1000
No. of Different Words: 136 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.903 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.125 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.381 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 63 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 42 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 21 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 14 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.333 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.04 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.583 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.426 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.628 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.155 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4