The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graphs show the information about the percentage of computer ownership from 2002 to 2010 based on the population, and it is also show the comparison of percentage of the computer ownership by education level in 2002 and 2010.
In 2002, the amount of people who owned the computer approximately 55%. From 2002 to 2010, the ownership of computer was significantly increased, in 2010 it became 75%, it was 20% higher than in 2002. The graph is also show that every two years the increasing of computer ownership was regularly 5%.
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and it is also show the comparison of percentage of the computer ownership...
Suggestion: and it is also showing the comparison of percentage of the computer ownership...
The graph is also show that every two years the increasing of computer ownership was regularly 5%.
Suggestion: The graph is also showing that every two years the increase of computer ownership was regularly 5%.
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