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he three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991, and 2001.
Given are the pie charts that illustrate the figures for the distribution of total expenses by a certain school recorded in the years of 1981, 1991 and 2001.
To begin, in 1981 the salaries of teachers (40%) constituted the greatest percentage of general spending, while at this point, payments of workers (28%) ranked second, which was followed by expenditures on materials such as books and etching (15%), furniture and supplies (15%) and insurance (2%). From that time on until 1991, teachers’ payments maintained its position at top reaching to the half of the total expenses. During this per...
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Sentence: During this period total sum of money spend on other employees' salaries and equipments dropped respectively by 6 and 10, whereas both resource and insurance expenditures experienced a slight rise.
Description: The fragment money spend on is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace spend with verb, past participle
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