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he three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991, and 2001.
Given are the pie charts that illustrate the figures for the distribution of total expenses by a certain school recorded in the years of 1981, 1991 and 2001.
To begin, in 1981 the salaries of teachers (40%) constituted the greatest percentage of general spending, while at this point, payments of workers (28%) ranked second, which was followed by expenditures on materials such as books and etching (15%), furniture and supplies (15%) and insurance (2%). From that time on until 1991, teachers’ payments maintained its position at top reaching to the half of the total expenses. During this per...
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Sentence: During this period total sum of money spend on other employees' salaries and equipments dropped respectively by 6 and 10, whereas both resource and insurance expenditures experienced a slight rise.
Description: The fragment money spend on is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace spend with verb, past participle
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Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 7 10
No. of Words: 196 200
No. of Characters: 972 1000
No. of Different Words: 116 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.742 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.959 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.927 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 67 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 56 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 48 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 27 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 28 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.519 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.429 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.441 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.756 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.055 0.07
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