HOMETOWN
In Indonesia there are many islands and have a lot of city. I was born in Kendari without my hometown in Makassar but I grew up in Kendari city. Kendari is one of city in Indonesia, my family and I live in there, I was school in there, Since elementary school until senior high school. Kendari have many tourism place like Wakatobi, Bintang samudra. But kendari still have facility not good like Unfavorable highway.
First of all, If I am going to replace one of the most important, I want to replace the highway because highway is one of facility very important. The highway is the only land access and many people use highway.
Secondly, Unfavorable highway can cause accidents. Many road accidents like collision occur because they are hallow and as a result of the accident many casualty. In Indonesia many cases of accidental because they cause the hallow roads, broken roads and slippery roads.
Finally, many people would like to open a business for sure if they saw the condition of the highway because the highway is one that affects business. Busy road so many entrepreneurs open a business.
In conclusion. Highway very important for all people in the world because the high only land access and many people use the highway.
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