The idea if having a single career is becoming an old fasioned one.The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.
As our world developing day by day approaches of the people to the career matters changes gradually. But of course there is a big amount of contrast between ideas. One group of human being is confident to state that each person should have only one profession and career, so to their mind having a single career is the best way to improve themselves and their speciality. But another group of people think on the conterary, as far as they know learning new subjects, keeping up with modern world can not be thought without having different abilities in various parts of professions. They support the ...
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Sentence: One group of human being is confident to state that each person should have only one profession and career, so to their mind having a single career is the best way to improve themselves and their speciality.
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Sentence: But another group of people think on the conterary, as far as they know learning new subjects, keeping up with modern world can not be thought without having different abilities in various parts of professions.
Error: conterary Suggestion: contrary
Sentence: Actually I hold the view that having one career is an old fashioned now, people changes, technology becoming better and better little by little so if we want to catch up with the time we must be keen on learning more things not only about our presfession, but also different related branches.
Error: presfession Suggestion: profession
Sentence: It means people all around world, from seven to seventy utilize internet at least for different purposes-reading daily newspapers, getting hot information about politics, economics, sport, music, about everhting.
Error: everhting Suggestion: everything
Sentence: Today a considerable number of people use social networks like facebook, twitter, myspace etc. All of these hepl us to share our ideas and information with others and to get something new from them.
Error: hepl Suggestion: help
Sentence: One the other hand, people how have much information about changing world always look smart, wise and reliabe.
Error: reliabe Suggestion: reliable
Sentence: To sum up, to put all things in a nutshell, I can resitate that, I can not imagine our modern world with all these old fasioned single career staffs.
Error: resitate Suggestion: restate
Error: fasioned Suggestion: fashioned
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Sentence Length SD: 11.813 7.5
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Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 8 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 355 350
No. of Characters: 1696 1500
No. of Different Words: 207 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.341 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.777 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.51 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 123 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 82 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 53 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 35 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.667 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.813 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.533 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.33 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.528 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.119 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5