It is generally believe that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and other are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be a good sport or musician?
Discuss both views.
What happen with people who do not have a talent?. What if people do not have any natural ability?. Which one will be more success than another?. This essay will break down this nature and nurture issue based on the writer knowledge and opinion.
Some people trust the belief that as human, we are determined by our genetics. This view is rising in scientific way of life. Some doctors, scientist, and common people obey this idea. They standing on agreement that if you were gave birth by a genius mother or have a super smart father, you may get the same talent and even better. So, you must be belittle yourself if you are not come from a well-educate family. Thereby, no wonder if some people who believe this idea will have a low self-esteem and a tendency of self-destructive.
As the fact is shown in television, most of the students in Ivy League have parents who also have had the same university. It is the example of how we inherit abilities from our parents. However, other thinks that issue is not obviously. Having a same chance to be success same as our biological parents could be caused by another thing which is more significance. The advantages of live in full facilities might be one of the causes. So, when you have a father who is a lecturer, you might more have a chance to be well-educated and become smart, because he will teach you.
Standing in contrast, many people believe that it is not about our biological factor, instead, it is because our effort to achieve something in our life. Artists, actors, athletes, and discoverer are not fully genius or have a high level of intelligence. Some of them have no talents or particular skills. But they were giving big effort in their past. For you who think that you have no chance to be success just because you are not a smart child as your parents said. I think, you should chance you mind and start to do something significance for your life. We can shape our own skills that can support us to be success.
In conclusion, it is obviously a good thing to have smart parents. However, there is no significant correlation between being success and inherit genetic from talented parents. But what is important, that we put an effort toward our life. That is the most reliable idea to be success.
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What happen with people who do not have a talent?.
What will happen with people who do not have a talent?
Sentence: They standing on agreement that if you were gave birth by a genius mother or have a super smart father, you may get the same talent and even better.
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Sentence: I think, you should chance you mind and start to do something significance for your life.
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