It is generally believed that people are born with certain talents,for instance for sport or music,and others are not. However,it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.Discuss both these views and giv

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It is generally believed that people are born with certain talents,for instance for sport or music,and others are not. However,it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.

Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

It is said that, some talents confined to an individual such as sports and music are innate. However, many people argue that, these talents can be earned by recurrent training. In this essay, i am going to state that talents in music and sports can be learned by training but inborn talents in music and sports make them perfect in these fields.

To begin with the argument about innate talents, especially in many sports persons and musicians. According to this aspect many individuals believe that all these forms of skills can only be achieved by genetically and there is no play of continual training. For instance, carnatic music is generally known as classical music, which is very hard to learn for everyone. However, some talented person learns it and becomes master in it without much trouble.

On the contrary, people can acquire some talents by taking lots of grooming. Because practicing certain things for a long duration makes some people perfect in that concerned activity. For example some sportspersons become legengs in their respective events only because of their hardwork. In this case hard work plays bigger roles than inborn skills.

As far as i am concerned, eventhough some talents can be learned by cevere training or practice, it will not make a person perfect in it if the person does not have an inborn taste in it. These talents are only confined to some gifted people and it is their duty to make use of these skills.

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