It is generally believed that some people are born with the certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In many parts of the world, there is now greater equality for all people to develop personalities. However, there are some who, in general, believe that some people are born with certain abilities in terms of sports or music, and others do not have this fortune. There are also so those who argue that wherever possible, the equality should be encouraged, especially when it comes to training and teaching people become experts. In this essay, I will explore both sides of this controversial issue.
It is evident that there are not few incidences of people who were born with certain talents. Take...
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