It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
That some people are born with certain talents and others are not is an absolute truth.On the other hand, if proper care and training is provided, any ordinary child can do good in his/her field of interest.
We see, people are not equally talented in this world. Some people are extraordinary talented and skilled in certain fields. With certain care they gradually become good at those fields. It is a fact that many people cannot sing well even if they are taught carefully from their childhood but others can do. For example, legendary musicians like Alvis Prestly, Michele Jackson, Elton John did not take any remarkable training to become a good musician at their childhood. In the field of sports, Pele, Maradona, Agasi passed their childhood as like as ordinary children. They born with talents on their respective field. It is a fact that people born with different strength and ability.
However, it is also true that if a young person is given a proper training he/she would become successful in the respective field. Proper guidance and interest to any field can lead to the great success on that. There are many people in this world who become successful professional by means of proper guidance and hardworking.
Therefore, it s obvious that some people comes in this world with extra ordinary talents but to shine in their field proper guidance and hard effort is required. On the contrary it is also a fact that whatever talent a person possesses, proper training, guidance, care and inspiration can lead him to the great and successful professional in a certain field.
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Description: The fragment They born with is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace born with verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
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