Life nowadays is generally much more stressful than in the past. Give some reasons why people suffer more from stress nowadays, and say what they can do to reduce it.
Nowadays, people do many activities in the whole day to earn much money and provide a standard happy family life. In Jakarta, Indonesia, people work with many assignments, so it could produce stress. Generally, today, people are more stressful rather than two decades ago. I would argue that stress can determine by three main reason : traffic congestion, unemployment and work-hour.
Firstly, vast numbers of people who live in big cities always deal with traffic jam. Two decades ago, people did not face this problem. Nowadays, they have been spending approximately four hours a day in the main road. It takes longer when combined with bad weather. As a result, it could make high transportation cost. People get more suffer than previously. Therefore, people might stay closer with their office to reduce economy cost and minimize the hours in the way.
Secondly, the number of job-seeker is higher than field of work. With limited skills people could not find appropriate job. It make the number of unemployment increase steadily. In Jakarta, people become more suffer because they must provide food and household for their family. To deal with this case, I suggest them to create new job or be a entrepreneur. They also can involve with internship when studying to add work-field experiences when applying new vacancy.
Thirdly, most of people, today, get involved with strict deadlines. People did not have much time to relax. Travelling in the weekends could be the best solution to refresh. In addition, people could spend a quality time with family to enjoy how beautiful life is.
In conclusion, people get more stressful today than a couple decade ago. People should be creative to win life competition. It is a vital, for a government to provide job occupation. The government must take control to reduce traffic congestion by creating public transportation rule. Lastly, people should spend time for relaxing, refreshing, and finding meaningful life.
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