In many countries schools are open before and after normal hours so child of working parents can stay longer at school. Do you think there are more advantages or disadvantages to this approach?
Recently, there has been an increase in the number of working parents in many countries. In order to assist these parents, schools have started before and after school programs to let children stay at school longer hours. There are advantages and disadvantages with this scheme which will be discussed in this essay.
There are a few problems associating with before and after school care. When children spend long hours at school they become mentally stressed and physically exhausted. Moreover, children who stay back while watching other students getting picked up by their parents might feel n...
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