In many countries today, people in cities either live alone or in small family units, rather than in large, extended family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend?
There is a lot of people prefer to live alone or even on a small family instead of living with a large family. Of course we all appreciate the older people and always welcome them. However, I think it is better for everyone or every small family to live separately. And, in this writing , I will try to express why I think so.
First of all, every family need to take some decisions about its future. If they live with much more people , they have to make those people account. And in this case, the older people would be a big burden on the new family if they wanted – foe example- to move to a...
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