Many people use distance-learning programmes (study material post,TV,internet...)to study at home. But some people think that it cannot bring the benefit as much as attending college or university. Do you agree or disagree?
Though some people want to sidestep distance-learning programs, technology will continue to play an increasingly prominent role in education in the years to come. This advancement infuses myriad of technological devices to the middle of educational practice, which allows students simply study at home. While some argue that the benefit of technological adaptation is overrated compared to conventional education model, I think that skeptical views dismiss the major arguments why those programs exist and adapt in such a beautiful way with technology.
Distance learning is a new phenomenon, which...
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Score: 7.0 out of 9
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
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Distance learning is a new phenomenon in which occurs due to the demands of giving a broad access to students.
Description: in which or at which = where
Suggestion: Distance learning is a new phenomenon which occurs due to the demands of giving a broad access to students.
Sentence: Nevertheless, lack of commitment is the major factors that contribute low completion rates.
Description: The fragment the major factors is not usually preceded by is
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace factors with factor
However, if the educational alternatives continue to grow, citizen would gain a huge advantage from it.
Suggestion: However, if the educational alternatives continue to grow, citizen would gain a huge advantage from them.
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
You still have serious grammatical issues. They will affect the mark greatly.
Read a good grammar book.
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