Many students prefer to take part-time rather than full-time courses. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this method for the students?
Today, people must try hard if they want become successful. Somebody who wins that has more abilities and has more skill than others. For gain this skills and abilities, people must start when they are young. They should study and the same time tries to gain more experience, so young people choose part time course. Choose part time course instead of full time course has some advantages and this advantages.
Many people like part time courses because they have more time to be more active in other area. For example, they can start new jobs or they can go to another class that has relevant to their future jobs. Besides, using of part time courses or more economically than full time courses. In the most of universities and colleges, full time courses are expensive so some student cannot take them. Also, some students who are employees are interested in part time course. These people because of their job have not enough time, so choose part time courses.
However, part time courses have some disadvantages. First of all, the time spend on this type of course usually is more than full time. Secondly, because of long time taken, maybe students lose their interested about their current courses. Consequently, they cannot earn enough information as they expected.
For sum up, in my opinion, it is not matter which type of course that you taken. The most important thing is result. Everybody makes her or his choice based on some target. I think when we know about our target, we should try hard to achieve. Sometimes part time course with all corns is the best way for us, and sometimes it is not.
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Sentence: For gain this skills and abilities, people must start when they are young.
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Sentence: Choose part time course instead of full time course has some advantages and this advantages.
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Suggestion: Refer to this and advantages
Sentence: First of all, the time spend on this type of course usually is more than full time.
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Sentence: Secondly, because of long time taken, maybe students lose their interested about their current courses.
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