Modern technology has made it easier for individuals to download copyrighted music and books from the internet for no charge. To what extend is this a positive or a negative development?
These days, thanks to modern technology, man people from all over the world have accessed the internet. Internet provides them with golden opportunity to download copyrighted music, movies and books freely. It is clear that this way has several negative and positive consequences that can not be ignored.
First of all the positive consequences that it has, is that individuals from different kinds of age group can gain newest music and books through internet for no charge just by one click and increase their knowledge and information easily which would never happen if they wanted to buy these...
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Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 343 350
No. of Characters: 1666 1500
No. of Different Words: 176 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.304 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.857 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.359 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 99 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 72 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 51 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 31 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 26.385 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.365 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.462 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.363 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.589 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.123 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5