As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work,job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing.
What factors contribute to job satisfaction?
How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?
Working is one of the most important low of nature. For earn money everybody is compelled working. Adults try their children learn good education in childhood for their future occupation. Everyone try to get more comfortable job for themselves. And from youth most people, mainly boys start work life. Work life is one of the most interesting and significant part of everyone's life.
So that, not only the job's fees and interests, but also its satisfaction is very important. From my point of view, satisfaction depends on several facts. One of the most necessary fact is salary. Because, if the salary is high employers must be willing. Their purpose is to earn money.
However, another important fact is the calmness of job. In general, there are some non-official professions without rest. The workers of these works are heavy life style. Taking into account that most adults spend their major part of life at work, it can be said that it is impossible.
Frequently, the third important fact is for my mind is desire of older people. Old people that work during all their life, they cannot without work or another thing that they are busy in. Although, government give them a great amount of pension.
In conclusion, wee can see in all countries of the world, it is not possible without work. Whereas, to take pay of your honest labor is very glorious. Nevertheless, it is unlikely that no everyone feels happy in their work. Government must do something about this.
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Sentence: Everyone try to get more comfortable job for themselves.
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Sentence: Old people that work during all their life, they cannot without work or another thing that they are busy in.
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Sentence: Although, government give them a great amount of pension.
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