Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development that any experiences we may have in our life.
Which do you consider to be major influence?
People's characteristics are one of the actual topic in the today society. Especially, growing children's behavior and characteristics are more necessary. For scientists explore, it is proved that people's some characteristics are inherited by either parents or some close relatives.Rather than the characteristics that we are born with, some experiences which we have in our life can influence on our personality and development.
I will try to indicate some arguments that which of them are more influence.Firstly, the characteristics of children which are inherited from generation is main thing and great influence . However, from my point of view, this influence is less than experiences during our life.For surveys, the first influence may be more.Nevertheless, it is not the most.This research is also may be false in some conditions.So that, it is possible that children have not got any similar characteristics with their generation members.
Secondly, argument about the some experiments that you may have in your life.In my opinion, this factor has more influence in everybody's life.In my iwn research for interest, I saw that children can change their behaviour and characteristics from childhood untill adult ages.In some case such accidents are happened in life that human is forced to change his/her character. In some cases it may happen due to people's lovelies.
In conclusion, for my mind, both of the given conditions are important and undeniable. In all circumstances, people must try to reflect good and benevolent treatments.Because, his character and behaviour determine the respect by the others about them.
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